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Chapter 1 - THE EIGHTH COUNT

“One,” Marisol said.

Giata Sarno held herself away from the wheelchair’s backrest. Her arms shook, and a narrow line of sweat darkened the collar of her shirt. The room had no music, but Marisol gave the numbers the steady rhythm of a song neither woman needed to hear.

“Two. Three.”

Giata's mouth tightened. Her fingers hovered above the armrests, ready to grab them. Marisol kept one palm close to Giata's shoulder without touching her. A month earlier, Giata would have slapped the hand away simply for being there. Now she watched it with the furious concentration of someone balancing on the edge of a roof.

“Four.”

From the doorway, Mrs. Constance drew in a sharp breath.

“Don't,” Giata snapped. “If you gasp, I'll fall.”

Constance pressed her lips together.

“Five. Six.”

Giata's body tilted slightly. Marisol moved an inch closer. The muscles around her damaged knee burned, but she did not shift her weight. Giata found her balance without assistance. Her shoulders squared, and something remarkable happened to her expression: the anger did not disappear, but it made room for pride.

“Seven.”

There was a sound in the hall. Shoes against polished wood. Elias had come home early again.

“Eight.”

Giata held the position for one final heartbeat before gripping the armrests and settling back. She looked startled, as if the person who had accomplished the movement were a stranger who had slipped into her body while she wasn't paying attention.

“You counted too quickly,” she told Marisol.

“Then next time we'll count slower.”

“I didn't say there would be a next time.”

“Yes, you did. Just not with those words.”

Giata threw a towel at her. Marisol caught it against her chest and laughed. Behind them, Elias stood just outside the threshold, unseen by his sister. He had attended meetings where men pleaded for millions of dollars. He had watched enemies go pale. None of it had prepared him for hearing Giata complain about a future exercise as though she expected to be alive inside that future.

He started to enter, then stopped himself. Dr. Whitlock's words returned with unwelcome precision. Ask what your sister said today. Do not purchase an answer.

Elias knocked on the open door.

Giata turned. “You can come in, but nobody is throwing you a parade.”

“I heard you reached eight.”

“Mrs. Constance has been reporting?”

“I heard the counting.”

“That doesn't mean you watched.”

“No,” Elias said. “It doesn't.”

For once, he left the silence alone. After a moment, Giata told him she had managed the position without pillows. Elias pulled a chair close, sat, and asked how it felt. She seemed almost suspicious of the question.

“Like trying to hold a ladder upright in a windstorm,” she said. “And like the first time I got a step right after doing it wrong a thousand times.”

Elias nodded. He did not mention specialists or machines. It was the hardest conversation he had conducted all week.

Later, when Marisol left the room, he noticed her pause at the staircase. Her hand tightened around the banister. The first step down cost her more than she wanted anyone to see.

“The physician said surgery,” he told her.

Marisol looked over her shoulder. “He said it might help.”

“He said delaying it could make the problem worse.”

“Did you ask him for my records?”

Elias considered lying. In his world it was common to call the truth a negotiation tactic. “I asked for his opinion. I didn't ask for records.”

“Then please don't do that again without asking me.”

He was surprised by the force of her objection. Nobody in the house refused him access to information. Marisol's expression told him this was not an attempt to challenge him. It was a line she had drawn around the only property she had always owned: herself.

“Understood,” Elias said.

She blinked. “That's all?”

“That's all.”

A phone vibrated in his pocket. The caller was Emmett Vance. Elias watched Marisol make her careful way down the stairs before answering.

“We have a small complication,” Vance said. His voice was as amiable as ever. “The woman upstairs. There's a man asking questions about her.”

“What man?”

“Dean Howerin. Former husband. Apparently he believes she has come into money.”

Elias stopped walking. He had reviewed Marisol's file after the incident in the hallway. Her former husband was described as absent, untraceable, and associated with disputed loan documents. “How does Dean know where she works?”

“You know Chicago. Everybody knows somebody.”

“That isn't an answer.”

Vance gave a gentle laugh. “If I learn anything useful, you'll hear it first.”

After the call, Elias went into his study, opened the file, and read it from the beginning. The inked notation beside Dean's name bothered him. It was not part of the investigators' printed report. Somebody had added three words by hand: MAY REAPPEAR SOON.

He called the head of his household security, Tomas Bell. “Who wrote this?”

Bell studied the document and said he didn't recognize the handwriting. The file had passed through Vance's office before it reached the house.

Elias told him to preserve the original and determine who had handled it. “Quietly,” he added. “And nobody approaches Marisol's former husband.”

Bell looked surprised. “Sir, you usually prefer direct action.”

“Today I prefer information.”

That evening Giata asked Marisol to count to eight again. They tried twice before her back muscles gave out. She rested and stared at the white-draped piano in the corner.

“Do you know why the music stopped?” she asked.

“Because your brother made a rule.”

“That's why it stayed stopped. It's not why it began.”

Marisol waited.

“My mother was driving me home from a rehearsal the night of the accident. We argued about a song. Stupid, wasn't it? My mother wanted me to perform a piece she loved, and I said it was sentimental garbage. She told me a dancer who couldn't feel anything had no business being onstage.” Giata's gaze moved toward the window. “Those were the last ordinary words I ever said to her.”

“You've carried that a long time.”

“Don't tell me to forgive myself.”

“I wasn't going to.”

Giata considered her. “Good.”

She reached toward the piano, then pulled her hand back. “The police said the other car ran a light. Everyone said it was an accident. Elias believed them because the alternative would have meant there was something he couldn't fix.”

Marisol remembered the framed photograph on the hall console: a woman with the same strong cheekbones as Elias, smiling between her children. The gold frame had been polished every day. Nobody touched it.

“What do you believe?” she asked.

Giata's eyes filled unexpectedly. “I don't know. I remember a voice through the windshield. A man saying, 'It's done.' It might have been a paramedic. It might have been a dream.”

“Did you tell anyone?”

“Emmett asked me about it right after I woke up. He said a brain under that kind of trauma makes stories to fill holes.” She swallowed. “I stopped telling people after that.”

Marisol felt a small, cold change in the air. She knew what it was like to have a man explain your own memories to you until you began apologizing for them.

She said, “You don't have to decide what it means tonight.”

“Why not?”

“Because tonight you reached eight.”

Giata stared at her, then wiped her eyes angrily. “Your priorities are ridiculous.”

“Probably.”

That night Elias stood in the hallway after the lights went out and noticed a photograph he had walked past every day. It showed Giata as a girl in an oversized rehearsal skirt, holding a trophy nearly as tall as her torso. Their mother knelt at her side with one arm around her waist. The photograph was slightly crooked. Elias straightened it, then realized that fixing its angle had become a poor substitute for remembering the people in it.

He took out his phone and scrolled to a contact he had never deleted: MOTHER. For years he'd left the number active and continued paying the bill, as though a live account could make a dead person reachable. He considered calling it. Instead he opened a blank note and wrote down everything he could remember from the month before the accident: Elena's argument with Emmett over donations, her request for independent accounting, Giata's unusual anxiety before the last performance. None of those memories was proof, and he labeled them as memories rather than facts. It was the first time he had ever made a record he didn't intend to use as leverage.

Before he went to bed, he left a note outside Giata's room: I HEARD EIGHT. IF YOU WANT TO TELL ME ABOUT NINE, I'LL LISTEN. She found it in the morning, called him an idiot for trying to be poetic, and put the note in a drawer instead of throwing it away.

The next morning a package arrived at the house with no return address. Inside was an antique metronome, polished dark wood, with its metal pendulum strapped securely in place. A handwritten card lay beneath it.

FOR THE GIRL WHO REMEMBERS THE COUNT.

Mrs. Constance was the first to see the package. The cup in her hand struck the kitchen counter hard enough to chip its rim.

When Elias entered, she was standing motionless beside the open box.

“Who sent it?” he asked.

“I don't know.”

“You recognized it.”

Constance stared at the metronome for a long time. “Your mother kept one exactly like that in the music room.”

“It could be a copy.”

“Perhaps.” Her voice was thinner now. “But hers had a scratch in the base. Giata put it there when she was eleven.”

Elias turned the instrument over. Beneath the felt pad was a narrow crescent scratched into the wood. On the inside edge somebody had written a date in faded blue ink: the night of the crash.

May you like

The metronome clicked once when he set it upright, though nobody had started it.

And beneath the base, hidden in a hollow compartment, Elias found a tiny brass key.

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